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 WE ARE LEARNING TO... WRITE IN PARAGRAPHS, PROOF READ, AND ADD DETAIL and description.  SUCCESS CRITERIA PUNCTUATION INTERESTING SENTENCE BEGINNINGS PROOF READ FOR SPELLING INTERESTING WORDS AND DETAIL MAIN EVENTS IN ORDER    DRAGON

I was watching the waves glistening at me. A few minutes later an ENORMOUS water dragon roared angrily. It roared so loudly, it nearly popped my ear drums! There was disgusting green slime on it. It was so disgusting. I was about to spew up. The dragon’s tail was frizzy, it had a fluro sort of green in the gaps of it’s teeth. The water dragon blew sparkled water at me, I got drenched.

The sun was shining at me so I got dry. When the dragon opened it’s mouth, it creaked weirdly. I was so impressed to see a dragon like that.

When I first saw it, I thought it was lots of people dressed up like you see in parades. The dragon also had fluffy feet and sparkly nails.

I gave it a rotten banana because that’s all I had and I didn’t know what it eats. The dragon spat it all over me, it felt sticky through my fingers and I looked and smelt revolting!

I don’t think it likes rotten bananas!

By Crystal     My Nana and Tiny

Today I’m having a sleepover at my nana’s house. My nana always gives me ice cream and she has a kitten called Tiny because it is so tiny. It always gives me cuddles on mylap, I feel nice and warm. It doesn’t like to drink water so my nana tips a little bit of milk in the bowl and fills water all the way up to the top and tiny thinks it is milk so she drinks it all up. My nana gives me a ice cream in a bowl or cone, I like it in a cone.

The other day Tiny run away and I was worried. I found her under the tree, we feed her three times a day for breakfast, lunch and tea. She runs away to play hide and seek. It takes me a while to find Tiny but I find her in the end. I love spending time with Tiny.

By Ellee

   